If you're looking for badfic, the contest entry Think Of Me is much worse: it's full of PoV tags, italic flashbacks ( followed by "Christine gasped as the flashback ended"... ouch!), teenage Christine, canon contradiction (of course when Christine said "Look, your future bride!" she wasn't talking about marriage...), people screaming "NOOOOOOOO" (only with far more Os than that), pidgin French ("'Je t'aime aussi, Mon Ange,' the brunette sighed contentedly"), Christine and Erik calling each other 'My Angel', characters referred to as "the blonde", "the masked man" etc., completely out-of-character Raoul proudly advertised as "FOP-BASHING!" -- and it doesn't even have anything to do with Christmas, as required by the (very lax) conditions of the contest.
It's almost a parody of classic badfic circa 2004, except that, while the writing is simplistic, it's not actually full of howlers.
The age thing -- well, she's mentally disabled. She even says so in the "Snow White" fic, but it's hard to miss after you've seen her around for a while. So one has to make an infinite number of allowances in that particular direction.
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Date: 2017-12-23 11:25 am (UTC)It's almost a parody of classic badfic circa 2004, except that, while the writing is simplistic, it's not actually full of howlers.
The age thing -- well, she's mentally disabled. She even says so in the "Snow White" fic, but it's hard to miss after you've seen her around for a while. So one has to make an infinite number of allowances in that particular direction.