You've discovered one of the unspoken truths of fanfiction -- it takes a lot of determination to get beyond the first few chapters of a story. (Of course, this is one of the advantages of basing your story on someone else's plot; at least you know where it's going. But even then it's rare for them to get to the end.)
Speaking of character-bashing... this one managed to get right up my nose with the first chapter. I mean, if you want Christine to be an unmarried mother bringing up Raoul's child named (wince) Aria, there have got to be more plausible ways of doing it than having him seduce her with a line like "A final proclamation of my love for you, my Little Lotte" and then have him randomly jump into bed with a girl called Sierra (for no apparent reason other than that the author finds it convenient to her desired plot). Also, see lecherous drug-addict Philippe as the arbitrary villain of the chapter...
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You've discovered one of the unspoken truths of fanfiction -- it takes a lot of determination to get beyond the first few chapters of a story. (Of course, this is one of the advantages of basing your story on someone else's plot; at least you know where it's going. But even then it's rare for them to get to the end.)
Speaking of character-bashing... this one managed to get right up my nose with the first chapter. I mean, if you want Christine to be an unmarried mother bringing up Raoul's child named (wince) Aria, there have got to be more plausible ways of doing it than having him seduce her with a line like "A final proclamation of my love for you, my Little Lotte" and then have him randomly jump into bed with a girl called Sierra (for no apparent reason other than that the author finds it convenient to her desired plot). Also, see lecherous drug-addict Philippe as the arbitrary villain of the chapter...