Tapestry of Deceit: Chapter Eight commentary

I'm picking up where chatastic and vampire_cookies left off. The fic is here, if you're curious. The sporkings of the previous chapters are here: Chapter One, Chapter Two, Chapter Three, Chapter Four, Chapter Five, Chapter Six, and Chapter Seven.

This will not be a formal sporking, as the chapter is too long and too dull and I'm not nearly funny enough to comment line-by-line on the whole thing. Instead, I will be reading the chapter and complaining about it as I go.

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